Ok, so the guy at the shop feels bad for the kid because he himself knows what it like to lose his sister. Then the kids sister also gets hit by a truck. Wtf the animation is awesome but thats def not front page material.
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Great job for you first flash movie. I'll just throw a few things out there as constructive criticism.
I found the story a little drawn out. Mostly I think because there wasn't a whole lot of animating of the characters. The mouths moving the exact same way also got kind of annoying.
Your humor made me chuckle a few times and I found the ending particularly comical how they annihilated the pirates. Also you did a good job drawing all the scenes.
IMA FIRIN MY LAZA!
pretty good animating, just make it longer next time, and add more sounds like "Ima chargin my laza" etc.
At first I didn't see that the stuff on the character was light. (it looked like semen).
other than that it was pretty good.
Look forward to more submissions from you.
thats not appropriate
SKI FREE! OMG! i dont know if anyone else remembers that old game but it totally made the ending of the resident evil clip amazing.
... not worth a review period
very clever with his eye showing the current time. Also liked the ending with the wrench.
keep up the good work.
Very original. Using masking the way you did created a very cool effect. The music also fit very well with your work.
the sad thing is that the stick man reminds me of one of my friends. lol
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